Opinion on my shop
Until now I did not give my opinion on the shop people asking. And because I lack experience in the field of web marketing. For cons, I find the feedback from more experienced people very profitable, so I may: what do you think of my shop (http://www.uncielradieux.kingeshop.com)? A first thank you in advance for those who are willing to answer me. Regards. Pascal.
Author : Coach15
Readings : 346
Creation : 2010-05-02
Mylène said ...
Hello coach
Fun as a site but it misses your cons n siret, the GTC and your n cnil which are mandatory.
The concept and very good and very bearer but the type of writing chosen is not suitable, too big too dark, too red.
Do not mention I m'eforcerai satisfy you because it's like I'll do my best, it must be on you, I will comply and implement my many years of experience.
As mentioned you are married with four children may not be necessary unless you have many female fans (I'm joking of course).
Get inspiration from other coaches who are known to check out their website, get inspired by the presentation, what they say and you can customize with your words so.
And so I do not know what to come visit your site wooden buddhas, necklaces and handbags (which are very nice by the way) it has nothing to do with your core business and it pollutes the professional side you want to give.
This is only my opinion and I wish you great sales.

www.mimischka.kingeshop.com
2010-05-02
koumy said ...
Houlala Pascal.

What can I say except that you convinced me at first glance!

The PHOTO IS very addicting:
the girl promised me anything I did not ..... and after reading I have not tried home later ...... I jumped on the party DATES me cool .... must say that I talk to girlfriends .... and I looked up the price to me more ....

Good start this wrong .... well yes:

1 - the picture is bleak personal training and installation is not elegant .... do not you think it would be preferable to take the profile picture with more light, say in a beautiful green countryside of a park.

2 - So what if eventually everything is done in the room ..... give desire and need CROSSING WITH ITS HUGE MATHILDA TEE SHIRT IS BLACK .... BEN ..... not the picture of the century which each of us be there wouldst identify .....

3 - You also ditto ... you know tee shirt NEAR THE BODY THAT ALLOWS TO HIGHLIGHT THE MUSCLES OF YOUR ARM .... what do you think .... BRAD PITT as has always been what it is today ....? more glamorous, and more elegance and strength!!

4 - your text is too long and do not you think that you should enjoy it to implement section with catchy titles so that all the girls who will type:
how to lose weight?
how to lose weight?
how to move HIS BODY?
how to do an internship slimming and toning?
How to find a personal trainer?
etc. ....
COULD HAVE THE HONOUR TO FALL ON YOU AND YOUR SERVICE RESHAPING!
+
put some of your text in your profile that is a bit too CV OF hiring and it will be more pleasant to read.

5 - in which am, put a picture of you in action, held ... hi ... hi .... happiest sports that we are not going to feel in the course .. . dipper guy on the corner ....
So action held + + SMILE AND NOT IN THE SUN Grimace EYE ..... FINALLY .... PASCAL Jvai TE ENTRUST MY BODY RESHAPING PROFESSIONAL MAKE MORE!

6 - Photos BOOTCAMPS1 BOOTCAMPS2 are PERFECT !!!!!
it makes you want, they are clear and leine action ..... I headed back over your first and they made me want
Do your site with this in mind !!!!! Clarity + Action + Sports held promise you will lose WEIGHT .... this is what I see looking at them ... VERY VERY GOOD

Even the text is alive .... again BRAVO

7 - sporting goods, fitness and nutrition are well presented ... nothing to say .... IDEM for books.

8 - GOOD PASCAL .... I join my dear mylène .... uh .... what is it Buddha YOU SAID that I M4AS sport so let's get .... especially since everyone is not necessarily attracted to it .... thus creating another site if you wish .....

9 - RIGHT OF WAY JE BAG AND NECKLACE ... that sell you .... ES T V2RITABLE THE PROFESSIONAL INSTALLATION AND WHICH HE DESCRIBED IN: WHO AM I ..... or do you have to choose the flea !!!!!?
You're lucky it's free Kingeshop therefore creates your shop after your 3rd buddha!
Just kidding .... But take a step back and see a dentist that the teeth do not .... and in addition bouchererie .... whatever.

TA IS THE MUST PHOTO HEAD ...
GIRLS LOVE THE PROMISE (EVEN FALSE) IS WHY THEY spend each year on creams and high heels!

Good CONTINUATION
koumy
2010-05-02
Coach15 said ...
A big thank you for taking the time to respond with gusto, enthusiasm and humor to my request for advice. Important to have real feedback! I started to correct this by removing categories including Thai Buddhas and Fashion Accessories ... I will move elsewhere. For the rest, I will review and relook at my spare time. I am finished with the conditions of events. a true galley! :-D One last question Mylène how to obtain the required CNIL N??? On this question, I salute you and wish you a good continuation.
2010-05-03
koumy said ...
Coach15 Hello!

I thought of you and your business this morning:

1 - Have you considered a form of health for members .... a confirmation that their physicians who can follow your course ....

2-and another form when the application for membership on their permission to take some pictures to feed your site

Spain hostels do and suddenly it was fun to show friends what you've done

3 - like the blow that makes me think that if you have somebody around you who wants to make a little money .... she only has to play photographer for your business .....

she photographed the participants and gave them a booklet souvenir photos for a small amount like 10 euros is the amount that will amortize his gear which will be basic and today it is doable ... .. but is not a price High .....

participants go home with it .... hee weight loss but mostly ....

WITNESS OF THEIR EFFORT AND BOOK OF TIME PAST has your internship

Internet is ... well .... but the small format paper 10X15 style photo book 6 PAGES easy to draw and move to impress his friends.

Good continuation

koumy
2010-05-04
Coach15 said ...
hello Koumy,
It's very nice to think about myself and develop my business ;-). Thank you for your very interesting suggestions that I will study very carefully to put them into practice. Cheers. Warmly. Pascal.
2010-05-04
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