To see my site
www.depotventebebe.fr
tell me what you think
thank you
sandra from dvb

Author	:	dvb
Readings	:	941
Creation	:	2009-11-24

Delphine said ...

Your topics are too many blocks. Enlarges your text in length.
Your GTC are short.
In the category of perfumes, you should bring a product by flavor rather than telling customers to contact you for the list.
I suppose you'll soon fill your product categories but there it is not pro see nothing in it

2009-11-24

bernardo said ...

Same as Delphine ... text too compact and entry blank ...

I think it must be read before any advice KingEshop not useless.
It is better to wait and put the site online when it is finished.

Otherwise, great idea
A +

2009-11-24

dvb said ...

ok
thank you for your opinion delphine
Indeed I am just at the beginning of creation site even though it has long been working jy
I take note of your information
for perfume I can not put them one by one because there are over 100 and that it inspires fragrance brands and sold under other names because of the law protects brand names but not their recipe
So the scent of sweet pepper style will not want to say anything al interesse
for cgv you say that c is short, what should I add? because I thought it was just one long block to read
thank you has you
cdt
sandra from dvb

2009-11-24

Delphine said ...

That's the GTC is a long time.
You must make an entry on your products, pricing, delivery, conditions of return ....
Go around other sites for you to see.
Go for example on the site of the redoubt. You'll see that their T C are impressive.

make it much perfume 100 is better but I put it.
And if you must put the details of each scent.
make it more pro and it gives greater desire to buy.

for the idea, I find it good too, because I do the same! LOL

2009-11-24

dvb said ...

bernardo thank you for your advice
and your opinion on the site
Can you give me the address of your site so jy casts an eye?
roof has also delphine if you will
thank you to you for advice
bonne journee
cdt
sandra from dvb

2009-11-24

bernardo said ...

www.argentvital.kingeshop.com

It will be online when everything is finished to the 7 / 10 December www.argent-vital.com
thank you
A +

2009-11-24

galexy_33 said ...

www.depotventebebe.fr

On your site I found the correct, except the color blue in the left column that is not necessarily very visible on all the pc ...

www.argentvital.kingeshop.com

Your site is very professional but the first sentence shock me!
Welcome to our shop online sales of colloidal silver
For me this language bothers me, knowing that the customer must be attracted in the first 20 seconds, if it already sees a problem with French ..

Good continuation to all and good luck for the future.
Galexy

2009-11-24

dvb said ...

thank you for your comment
the shop can not be opened because I'm still 'notice of dismissal and therefore single licensed in January
after that date I must see what I can get over assedic for 4 months because I don have no income!
yet I prepare the site, put my affairs and once all the paperwork is ready I start, so the current anticipated opening beginning of 2010 years!
I therefore asking you your opinion on that date!
good continuation has you all and meri again for your comments!
good sales you
sandra from dvb

2009-11-25

bernardo said ...

YIKES ... What blunder ... like how when you pass 20H front of a screen, you can not see what is written

2009-11-25

dvb said ...

hi everyone
ca y est, I have changed my GTC, all is well detailed and I've also change the color of the columns of products
thank you for your comment
good sales you
sandra from dvb

2009-11-26